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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Driving through the graveyard at night Hoping some little kids aren't playing Hide-n-Seek Instead you hit a tombstone hoping no one will notice Being stupid and showing off you break the light How wonderful Sitting in the car making sure everyone is okay Everyone is terrified Two children crying One person yelling The other trying to calm people down Including the driver You are terrified about what your parents are going to say Wishing you hadn't done it You sit terrified No one is hurt physically, but emotionally Even the good driver that I was Wasn't thinking about what she was doing Knowing she wasn't even going 5 mph Ruined the car You have a beginning You have a middle You have the climax And now your terrified ~Please be careful when you drive. I could have done more damage than I did, but I was lucky. Bad things can happen in the safest places.~ "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Please take your time when you drive, I never thought anything would happen when I was driving, but I was wrong. I just hope that it doesn't happen to anyone else. I know that it wasn't that big of a deal, but I was devestated. Take care, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Chel, accidents happen, and as much as the accident seems your fault, we all have a part in it cause we wanted you to drive in there. You're a great driver, and I'll stand by you for that one. And you know I'll always be a careful driver. Kittie |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... sounds like you had quite a fright Chel. Glad you're all OK though! You had my heart going with this verse ... nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
scary indeed Chel, glad to hear everyone is ok, and as hard as it all may seem, you'll learn from this and you'll be a better driver...right? Keep it up my dear!! (the writing that is) Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
It is nice to hear that you, along with your passengers are okay, but also disturbing when one realizes that anything, including a life can come, and go in a heartbeat. Stay safe, and be careful out there; Driving is no joke. By the way, nice poem! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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