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Teen Poetry #3

True Love Lost

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-07-19 12:50 PM

As I feel your innocence amongst me
I feel like an angel in the sky
You bring me up when I'm in need you cherish me when I' am weak
You show me passion on your knees you fill me up with perfume showers
You always said I'll be their for you and you always was
You never lied to me, but always loved me as I'am
My tears of leaves will always shine as long as you be mine for all time
Just say you love me twice upon a time and never let me go when I'am ready to die
Remember me for all I've done for all it's worth you still the one
The one for me to love and hold until it's time to sleep in the cold
To sleep alone for eterninties to come and be remembered as the son of love
To be admired as a lover and also a very loving father
To feel my children all succeed and my loving wife to see me weap, but weap of no painful sorrow, but be thankful that there's a tomorrow and to love all in the same tone because you never want to love alone.

Rachel Turner
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas

1 posted 2000-07-19 01:05 AM

Hey!! Great poem!!! it has a lot of feeling in it!!!

BabyGirl1
Member

since 2000-07-02

Posts 91
Morris, IL

2 posted 2000-07-19 11:57 PM

This was a wonderful poem. It shows every aspect of love. Everyone wants and needs a love like that.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-02 08:23 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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