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Change The World |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
I get my inspiration from music mainly...Westlife's "Change The World" inspired me to write my own little version. "Change The World" Happiness is getting further away, girl I miss you more than words can say Baby, I need a miracle now I can change the world I can change your mind But the only thing I can't change is our love You can give me heaven then take it away How can I change the world? Where's the miracle I need now... I need to change the world I can't sleep, I can't dream Everything I knew Is a lie Without you I need to change the world But I only could While I am with you I made a bet I made a vow That I would never lose you I can't lose this now I want to change the world But I could only do that with you Take my hand, babe And we can make it til the end C'mon baby, let's change the world Let's show people what it's all about Let's show people how it was, how it is, and how it should be Only if you take my hand.... -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes get remembered, but legends never die." |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Touching poem Alex. I can tell you have a sensitive side to you. Girls like that in a guy! Keep up the good work. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Well, I must admit that I am a West Life fan and that song is deffinately very moving. I too get most of my inspiration from songs. The lyrics express so much, even if we don't know the 'true' meaning of the lyrics we have the way they make us feel, and this is so important. Everyone needs something that inspires them, and music is a great way to get it!! |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
I get my inspiration from music, yeah. It's a good thing to get inspiration from. Sometimes it isn't the lyrics that are good. It's how it's sang. A good example is "Can't Lose What You Never Had"....by Westlife. Usually, great lyrics + great beat = phattest song, mostly. -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes get remembered, but legends never die." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely Alex! Music can be a wonderful inspiration ... nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, once again great poem. They just keep getting better and better. Keep it up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
This is an excellent poem, and very strong. Everything is said, at least from the point of view I have, and I really enjoyed reading it. Kittie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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