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Rachel Turner
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas

0 posted 2000-07-18 02:33 AM

     I know you didn't know it
            or if you did
      you didn't show it
       But i really liked you
      and thought you liked me
               too
    But i realized deep down
              inside
       I am a "nothing" in your
               eyes
    You just don't know the pain I am
               feeling
   In this broken heart that needs
               healing
    Everytime i see you i go weak in the
               knees
      But all you are is a
             tease
     The night i found out about that other
               girl
       I fell from my fantasy land,
            back to this awful
                world
     I wish i could make you
             see,
     That your the only one for
               me!!!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-18 06:22 AM

Welcome to Passions Rachel!
This had a lovely flow,
very nicely written, and straight from the heart.
I hope all works out for you soon

Check your e-mail for a special message ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-07-18 08:20 AM

Welcome to Passions!!! I enjoyed this poem, great first post. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more from you.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

3 posted 2000-07-18 09:24 AM

This is a really good poem. I like the form, very interesting. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep writing and have fun.

love ya
Danielle

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

4 posted 2000-07-18 01:05 PM

Welcome to our ranks! Glad you could join us. You obviously have a talent that should be shared. You've come to the right place. Great first post. Waiting for more.

Thomas

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-07-18 01:24 PM

Lovely poem. don't worry, the right person will come to your life.

Rachel Turner
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas

6 posted 2000-07-18 05:42 PM

Thanks for all the replies!!! They really mean alot to me!!!

Love,
Rachel

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-12-02 12:57 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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