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The One I Love |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
You and you alone, Turned a heart of stone. Once was blind, Love did I finally find. A heart of pure gold, Always you showed. You showed me the meaning of love, You're an Angel sent from above. For all my life I've looked, And all my life my dreams cooked. Now there's you, Shown me a love that's true. All my life I'd wait, Now I see you at the Gate. This is my love, My angel from above. You, You are my love..... This is about the girl I love, I love her more than anything but I dont know how to make her see that |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Beautiful poem. You are blessed that you have found such a love. I think that the way to make this girl know that you love her is by showing her this poem. Great work. "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is one beautiful poem...and i think you should like babygirl said give it to her...then she will really know how you feel about her...good luck... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
thanks i did give it to her, i gave it to her the same time as i wrote it |
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Rachel Turner Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 16Judsonia, Arkansas |
I think this poem is very sweet!! And if the poem doesn't melt this girls heart then something must be wrong w/ her!! but it is a very good poem!! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This is beautiful. I also agree that you should give her the poem. I think girls would agree with me when I say that most of us like getting poems. So you do what's best. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
This is a beautiful poem. I agree with Chel...you should give her the poem. I know if a guy gave me a poem as sweet as that I'd probably at least give him a chance. Good luck and keep up posted. Have fun and keep writing! love ya Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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