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Remember Me??
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Remember Me?? |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
I'm the one who pulled you from the fire, I'm the one who showed you desire. Remember me?? I'm the one you ran to, I'm the one that said anything I'll do for you. Remember me?? I'm the one who held you when you were dying, I'm the one who sat there lying. Remember me?? I'm the one who's to blame, I'm the one who saw the quick flame. Remember me?? I'm the one who heard the shot, I'm the one who held you on the spot. Remember me?? Nothing more can be said, Because now you're dead.... |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Wow, this is a great poem, I really like how everything is displayed, it's really powerful. Keep up the great work! Kittie |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Good work, but since this is also in Open poetry, I will close this thread because double posting is not allowed. If anyone would like to reply to this, please go to Open, thanks. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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