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Teen Poetry #3

Love me or use me

Zombie Man
Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2000-07-17 12:48 PM

So we are always holding hands
never really knowing what to do
But I never seen such a life in your eyes.
Just always being so sweet and gentle.
While my mind is mental.
And do you really love me?
Or just wanna use me?
But I really need to know.
So I can stay or go.
In my mind I know your so fine and I want you to be mine.
But what shall I do to get with you and make me dreams so true.
Please don't play with my heart.
And later rip it apart.
Then you shall hear me scream and shout I hope you die..
Come on girl lets be one.
Lets start a life of fun.
Then it shall be a happy ending.
And so no more pretending

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-17 09:12 AM

Very interesting. I thought that this poem was well written. Keep up the good work.
Hope to read more soon.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

2 posted 2000-07-17 01:20 PM

This is a really great poem, and the emotion stands out really strong. Keep up the great work!
Kittie

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-01 11:20 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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