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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
He had loved her but she did not She only liked him as a friend but he wanted to be her boyfriend she said she liked someone else but he did not like her the way she liked him she calles him names He's upset but still loves her she had broken his heart many times But he still loves her |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
Very nice how you broughtthat aspect of relations to life. The feeling described in that poem is one i know far too well. but thats life. Good job! |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This is a nice Poem keep it up... With love, cutie |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. I hope that you keep this up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Great poem, sad ending. Keep up your writing! Kittie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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