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Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176


0 posted 2000-07-16 03:41 PM


He had loved her
but she did not
She only liked him as a friend
but he wanted to be her boyfriend
she said she liked someone else
but he did not like her the way
she liked him
she calles him names
He's upset
but still loves her
she had broken his heart many times
But he still loves her


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The_Driven
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 60

1 posted 2000-07-16 05:05 PM


Very nice how you broughtthat aspect of relations to life. The feeling described in that poem is one i know far too well. but thats life. Good job!
cutie2005
Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA
2 posted 2000-07-16 05:32 PM


This is a nice Poem keep it up...
  With love,
    cutie

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-07-17 09:14 AM


Great poem.  I hope that you keep this up.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

4 posted 2000-07-17 01:05 PM


Great poem, sad ending.  Keep up your writing!
Kittie



Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-01 11:20 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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