Teen Poetry #3 |
Meant to be? |
Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
There is a quiet outside but nothing but noise in my head I try to sleep, but my thoughts crawl back to you I know that it hasn't been that long I know I shouldn't rush things That fate will have her way And what is meant to be will But all i can do is dream of the day we'll be together When I can call you my own And dream of you freely So many people are pushing For exactly what i am longing for But I fear that all of their trying will simply jinx what I want I don't know what I can do I don't know what more I can say I'm afraid of letting you in But even more that you might slip away I need to know when things will be And how long is must wait to see If it's truly meant to be **I wrote this one a long time ago, just after I had met my ex-boyfriend, who turned out to be the love of my life.... "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Very well written poem. I remember the feeling well, when I met the love of my life. Keep up the good work. Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i give you props for this poem...it is very good...by the way i like your quote...anyways i wish you luck with this guy... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Rayz Junior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 13Fresno, CA, U.S.A |
That is a really great poem. I know how you feel. It really showed the feelings of not knowing if he was the one for you. Great job. And continue the great work. Ray |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I know the feeling. I am glad everything worked out. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for all your kind replys thomas... it's such a confusing yet wonderful time!! Erin... I think at thispoint I need a miracle with him instead of luck, we''ve been through so much, I only hope one day we can find our way back together.... he really is the love of my life. Ray, thanks for the kind words. Chel, I'm glad it worked out too, and although it's over now, I still have the memories!~! "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Awesome poem you have here. I can definately say I've has these feelings before. Good luck! *~Mredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
thanks so much.... I'm glad you enjoyed it "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I must say this is a wonderful one indeed! I'm sorry that it is over now, but all you have to do is look at the situation and say "I have learned" which I'm sure you have. With each and every person you are with in your life you learn something from them. At any cost, I hope you love again. You'll always have a place in your heart for this guy since he is "the love of your life" but you also have to move on. Keep up the good work! Best of luck in life and love! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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