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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-07-15 10:42 AM


There is a quiet outside
but nothing but noise in my head
I try to sleep,
but my thoughts crawl back to you

I know that it hasn't been that long
I know I shouldn't rush things
That fate will have her way
And what is meant to be will

But all i can do is dream
of the day we'll be together
When I can call you my own
And dream of you freely

So many people are pushing
For exactly what i am longing for
But I fear that all of their trying
will simply jinx what I want

I don't know what I can do
I don't know what more I can say
I'm afraid of letting you in
But even more that you might slip away

I need to know
when things will be
And how long is must wait to see
If it's truly meant to be


**I wrote this one a long time ago, just after I had met my ex-boyfriend, who turned out to be the love of my life....


"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

© Copyright 2000 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
TAP2
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
1 posted 2000-07-15 11:38 AM


Very well written poem. I remember the feeling well, when I met the love of my life.
Keep up the good work.

Thomas

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-15 03:46 PM


i give you props for this poem...it is very good...by the way i like your quote...anyways i wish you luck with this guy...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Rayz
Junior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 13
Fresno, CA, U.S.A
3 posted 2000-07-15 04:43 PM


That is a really great poem. I know how you feel. It really showed the feelings of not knowing if he was the one for you. Great job. And continue the great work.

Ray

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-07-15 08:11 PM


I know the feeling.  I am glad everything worked out.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-07-21 12:12 PM


Thanks for all your kind replys

thomas... it's such a confusing yet wonderful time!!  

Erin... I think at thispoint I need a miracle with him instead of luck, we''ve been through so much, I only hope one day we can find our way back together.... he really is the love of my life.

Ray, thanks for the kind words.

Chel, I'm glad it worked out too, and although it's over now, I still have the memories!~!

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-07-21 02:07 PM


Awesome poem you have here. I can definately say I've has these feelings before. Good luck!

*~Mredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2000-07-21 02:32 PM


thanks so much....
I'm glad you enjoyed it

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
8 posted 2000-07-21 07:51 PM


I must say this is a wonderful one indeed! I'm sorry that it is over now, but all you have to do is look at the situation and say "I have learned" which I'm sure you have. With each and every person you are with in your life you learn something from them. At any cost, I hope you love again. You'll always have a place in your heart for this guy since he is "the love of your life" but you also have to move on. Keep up the good work! Best of luck in life and love! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2007-12-02 08:26 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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