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Teen Poetry #3

You stole it all away

essenceofangels
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 36

0 posted 2000-07-14 07:36 PM

My mother always told me
"love will find a way"
I believed her just untill today.

My father used to tell me
"Men will treat you right"
I always believed him untill tonight.

My sister always said to me
"you will find a man someday"
What else was I supposed to think?

I used to believe it all
was true just untill
you came in my life
and stole it all away.

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"Look back on life with kindly eyes"

"A word is dead When it is said,
Some say.I say it just Begins to live That day."

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essenceofangels

[This message has been edited by essenceofangels (edited 07-16-2000).]

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

1 posted 2000-07-15 01:23 AM

I'm so sorry that you were hurt so bad by a guy. I am a guy and I apologise myself for any wrong that any male has done to you.

But your family is right. Even though myself I have had this stolen away from me a few times,(yes it will happen again.) It always seems to come back. Just be strong, and love yourself, and eventually love will come back to you.

jason

essenceofangels
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 36

2 posted 2000-07-16 11:52 AM

Wow! Thankyou so much for your kind words I really appreaciate them!You dont have any idea that you have the ability to brighten
up peoples day with words like that!
Thanks agian!
~Erica~< !signature-->

"Look back on life with kindly eyes"

"A word is dead When it is said,
Some say.I say it just Begins to live That day."

@---'-----
essenceofangels

[This message has been edited by essenceofangels (edited 07-16-2000).]

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2000-07-17 08:39 AM

Hello essenceofangels! Here I am to look in on u! This is terribly realistic isn't it? There's a nostalgic touch to that and I like it *S* u seem to haf stopped posting in Corner Pub..

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-01 11:19 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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