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Teen Poetry #3

The beautiful Birds

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

0 posted 2000-07-14 05:53 PM

As I look in the sky
I can hear the pretty birds
Spring is here
Leaves and flowers began to bloom
As I stood in the yard
The cars went back and forth
The grass is tall
The flies are out
The weather is hot
sweet on my forehead
The birds come from south
In a group or two
They land on the trees
Even on the wires
When the sun starts to set
They fly into there nests
Untill the next morning

[This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-14-2000).]

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

1 posted 2000-07-14 06:00 PM

Well written, and very visual. Keep up the great work.
Kittie

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2000-07-15 04:15 AM

Interesting topic. I like poems like this that simply express beauty in it's simplest forms.. you pulled it off rather nicely.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2000-07-15 03:29 PM

Very interesting topic. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

4 posted 2000-07-16 11:27 AM

Thank's to all the people who read my poems and i hope you continue and enjoy them. Thanks again
Lovely_kris

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-01 11:16 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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