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Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-07-14 05:12 PM

God gave you two eyes,
for you to look at me.

God gave you two arms,
so that you can comfort me in them.

God gave you two hands,
to hold on to me so that I wont wander free.

God gave you two ears,
allowing you to listen as I speak.

God gave you lips,
for you to give me sweet kisses.

God gave you a mind,
ensuring me I will be on it all the time.

God gave you a heart,
to welcome in my love.

God gave you me,
because he knows I will always love you.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

1 posted 2000-07-14 05:53 PM

This is written very well, keep up the great work! I like how you work through each stanza.
Kittie

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-14 06:28 PM

This was really lovely Erin! I very much enjoyed the sweet sentiments this portrays ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

essenceofangels
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 36

3 posted 2000-07-14 07:17 PM

Very beautiful Erin
I loved it keep it up my dear!

               @--'---
            a rose for a rose

             essenceofangels

"Look back on time with kindly eyes"
"A word is dead
When it is said,
Some say.
I say it just
Begins to live
That day."

BabyGirl1
Member

since 2000-07-02

Posts 91
Morris, IL

4 posted 2000-07-14 10:34 PM

This was a great poem. I really enjoyed it. It put a smile on my face knowing that God has someone in mind for me to do all of those things with. Great work.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

5 posted 2000-07-15 12:43 PM

Erin, this is a beautiful poem. It's so nice to be in love isn't it. I hope it works out for you.

jason

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

6 posted 2000-07-15 07:00 PM

Love makes every thing seem a little brighter doesn't it. I hope all your days can be as bright as this poem
IsGona

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

7 posted 2000-07-15 07:19 PM

Our dearest Erin in love?!? wow! hehehe j/k.

I'm glad you are happy! I hope everything works out! at any cost this poem was wonderful and I hope he has read it!! Love Always~*~Jess~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

8 posted 2000-07-16 10:47 PM

I love the perspective you've projected in this. Poeple would generally write about what god has given "them"....;you wrote about god giving someone "you"...wonderful

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-12-01 11:16 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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