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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
I want this to end I've had enough Of this horrid thing, this "love" I want to forget you But you're a fixture in my mind I don't want to love you I can't help it this time Because of you and only you My sanity is running low It's your fault and no one else's That I am destined to be alone It's you and only you That makes me cry Obsession, Infatuation It kills me inside I used to laugh I used to smile Until the day I was consumed By endless, relentless thoughts of you It's like an addiction I can't escape you And if I didn't love you I'd hate you. ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
As usuall you have captivated me once again. If this is a current problem, my only advice would be to stay strong, hold your ground, and use your inner streingh to defeat this outside attack on your being. Please do keep writing, and I promise to keep voting for you. Jason  |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
it's very easy for me to relate to this work. i like the very last lines. "if i didn't love you, i'd hate you." truer words were, indeed, never spoken. "The bar is always open and the time is always right. If god's word goes unspoken, then the music plays all night." -Bradley Nowell |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I, too, can relate to this piece. The only advice I can offer is to not spend all of your time and energy trying to forget this person, because it isn't going to you. You just have to let time do it's work on you. Best of luck! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think you did a great job. You realy expressed how you felt. I know it's hard to try to ferget about someone. Well keep up the great work and hope to see more. Lovely_kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
you spilled out all your feelings for this person...you did a really good job at it too...i give you props for this poem...if i felt this way i would just keep it all in...and not tell a soul in the world...keep your head up...stay strong...try your hardest to not let it get to you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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