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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
You said you'd never hurt me Never cause me any fear You told me that you'd love me Till the end of time is near You said she was a friend of yours Nothing more and nothing less You told me not to make a scene For her life was just a mess You said you'd never lie to me Never make me mistrust you You told me not to make accusations For she just wanted you too. You said that you were sorry never meant for it to occur You told me that its over now For it's all just one big blur You said you want to start over Never look back at the past You told me to forget it all For we could make it last "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This poem brings back some errie memories. I love the way I almost hear every word you're saying as I read it. It's something bout the way you write that does it...give Thomas a kiss for me. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely written BabyGirl! Oh, it brings back so many memories ... you've expressed yourself well. I do hope you'll find someone new to ease the heartache in time.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Heart-wrenching, and guilt inflicting, this is a very personal piece. I'm glad you can express it finally. I love you, and you know I'll never hurt you. Love alwayz, Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a beautiful poem...i think that we all have been through this stage in our life...you write beautifully...and you have my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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essenceofangels Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36 |
Wow!Very well written I must say!! Magnificent my dear can wait to see more! Love, Essenceofangels "Look back on time with kindly eyes" "A word is dead When it is said, Some say. I say it just Begins to live That day." |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderfully-written poem, but so sad. It's hard when a relationship ends, but you just have to pick up the pieces and move on. I wish you the best of luck! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I don't really know what to say, because I always seem to say the wrong thing. but Thomas' cowboy icon looks like mancow. luv ya lots babygirl. jason  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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