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Into The Night
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Into The Night |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
I walk briskly, rapidly. I don't know my way, yet this winding path seems vaugely familiar. Have I walked this road before? I continue on. I can't see ahead, can't see beyond my self-created border. I've reached my own dead end. So I turn around, retrace my steps. What wrong turn did I take? Is it too late to fix it? I stumble and fall, into the many potholes and bumps along this road. But no matter how many times I fall, I will get back up, I will forge on, No matter the circumstances. Into the dark... Into the night... ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
great poem i like your style. you express yourself well ,and i can see that you have a good amount of self-confidence!! dont ever loose that!!  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I've been down that road many times aswell...keep your determination but don't depend on it to heal the burn of your tears...somewhere along the way you'll find a place in which you can put them.... Excellent poem Snickers...I love your depth... D.E. < !signature--> Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow. I really like this Nikki. Your style and expression is very impressive. I really like how you throw in that positive ending in the last few lines. Yay for positivity! Hee hee!  Ps - thanx for your kind reply to Rainmaker Much love, Kris ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
mr, Dark Enchantress, and Kris: Thank you for the kind replies! I'm glad that you liked this one. No matter how tough things get, you've just gotta forge on. Thanks again! ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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