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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
You stab me with your sharp dagger. The dagger of harsh words. It's pointed tip pierces my tender heart, And it bleeds. You whip me with your fierce whip of hatred, that you have created for me. The painful whip scars my flesh, And it hurts. You lock me up in a cage made of rage. The strong bars restrain me from my own emotions, And I cry. Just stop, quit, end these bitter lies, which hurt me again and again. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
 wow girl! Deep! very deep! I completely understand, and all I can say is that I truly hope that this pain will stop. Best of luck! Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow. I sincerely hope this poem wasn't written from experience because no one should ever have to feel this way.  Anyways, it was very well written - very powerful and sorrowful. GREAT job!  Love and Hugs, Kristin < !signature--> ~*All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe *~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ [This message has been edited by Kandi (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
Thanx guyz!!  Kris, actually it was written from experience, but also in the hopes that the pain of all these lies will end. And I do think it's coming to an end now. Thank you for reading it and sharing your opinion!~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** |
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