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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Why are you still a mystery Are you a crook in diguise Are you a a flirt in eternal loves's guise Someone had soothed this broken heart A new life I begin to see in her eyes I feel so natural and straightforward with her We'll remain as friends though not the best Never try to teach me or change me If you do so,it will be the end of 'us' Don't utter words you don't ever feel yourself I fear that you have had a sinful past That denied all love I gave to you So do we have a deal? |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very dark and mysterious, I love it! And interesting choice of words. *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks LF. Well I guess the poetry is not dark and mysterious as her...I had been blind may be..anyway I still like my ex but can never trust her fully... Sincerely a_l |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
excellent poem Isn't it true how blind love can be? How how mysterious all our ex's are... excellent writing Steph |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Good poem. I enjoyed it. Sometimes wwomen can be trecherous like that. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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