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EroseGrover
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

0 posted 2000-07-11 06:42 AM

There are so many diffrent things
that you did to me
That I promise myself
I wont do to mine.

Over and over I Tell myself
a number of things that you said
that will never come through my lips.

You may not of ment the things
you said and did.
But its the fact
that you DID say and do them

My list will go on and on
but there is one thing you
did that will not only be on
my list but on my heart

The Fact you loved me
no matter what horrible thing I did.
Will stick with me always
and I thank you for the love you gave me!

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-11 09:54 AM

Very beautiful. I hope that I see more from you. Keep up the good work. I loved it.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

BabyGirl1
Member

since 2000-07-02

Posts 91
Morris, IL

2 posted 2000-07-11 05:07 PM

This was a good poem. A mothers love is always special and stays with you forever.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-11 07:22 PM

you know i am starting to become a big fan of yours...lol...you write very good...i wish that i could say the same about my mom...but me and her arent really on speaking terms...or even visiting...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

4 posted 2000-07-11 09:08 PM

That was a really nice poem!! Loved it!! Keep writing..

Love ya,
Amanda

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-07-12 06:16 AM

Written from the heart Erose! Mothers may not always say "everything we like", but to "know" you have her love is a treasure indeed. Well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

essenceofangels
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 36

6 posted 2000-07-12 09:30 AM

Wonderful poem my dear! cant wait to see more!
essenceofangels

Snickers
Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 88
East Haddam, CT

7 posted 2000-07-12 09:53 AM

This is beautiful and heart-touching. Mothers are the ones who tend to stick with us through good and bad, and we're stuck with em! But I'm glad that u have a good enough relationship with your mother to write her this poem. Keep it up!

~<3 Alwayz~
**Nikki**

~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-12-01 10:59 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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