Teen Poetry #3 |
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all i need |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
all i need ive missed you so much thought about you every day i miss you in every possible moment and love you in every possible way as i sit here i think think of what you say i remeber every moment we were together i try to relive every day i try to recall remeber your every touch try to remeber your kiss although it doesnt work all that much as im on the fone with you you ask whats wrong i try to tell you that ur not here and thats what keeps me sad so long you tell me to cheer up but thats so hard to do because no matter how much we talk id give a world for a kiss from you if you were here right now id tell you of my day and week but i wouldnt want to talk for a kiss is what id seek i do love to be with you and to talk to you is bliss but i can do that on the fone right now all i need is a kiss i wrote this while i was on vacation, i really missed my gf, now im back and im soo glad to see her again always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
wow what a suprise ending...i thought you would have said how you want her back and all that...but it ended better then i thought it would...this is a good poem...so thats where you were...you were on vacation...i was wondering why i didnt see any new work from you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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toes21 Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 24 |
Your poem is beautifuly written, from the heart. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This poem is very good. I can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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