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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-07-09 08:34 PM

Well, there is always a story behind all of my poetry, and this one is no different, this past week, I was working at a carnival, and during my break, I went on some rides, and well...you can figure out the rest...

I always seem to meet guys,
In the strangest places.

But I never expected,
To meet someone like you.
In a place such as this,
On the Tilt-A-Whirl.

I have always looked around,
To see familar faces.

My mind is spinning,
Going out of control.
Unsure of myself,
With you on my mind.

You remind me of someone,
Of who, I'm still not sure.

I love to see you smile,
And it makes me grin.
You are in my dreams,
As well as my thoughts.< !signature-->

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 07-10-2000).]

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-07-09 11:30 PM

well this is different not my kind of poem cause the feelings are yours. but the style and format i like and the story behind it but again its your story. enjoyed this alot and do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-10 06:43 AM

Sounds exciting Tamma ... love on the Tilt-a-Whirl! Sounds like a fun job too! Hope to read more!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2000-07-10 10:50 AM

loved the poem. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-07-10 04:11 PM

this is such a good poem...i like it...its weird though how some of us girls meet guys in the weirdest places...you know what i mean??? its cool though...good luck with the guy...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2000-07-11 12:09 PM

just *bump*ing this one up...Its one of my favorites that I've written lately

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-01 10:54 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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