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to an x-friend |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
so many words i have to say.. writtings that will never be read.. feelings that will never be cleansed i wish you knew how much i miss you how i never meant to make the wrong decision but that's my nature sorry for my friendly ways...... i was unable to control my words, .......you touch one minute it was laughs next second kisses we floated in a sea of lust never had a friendship like yours... and in my desire to be me.... i fondeled with your feelings.... and now i've lost you @#%$&^(+?~!@#%$&&_+_()*^&$@@! thanks for reading, love.... buttercup |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I liked it. Keep up the good work. It was well written, and I liked the concept. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Wow have I got alot to say about this one!! I have been waiting to see something like this out here. The very same thing happened to me once. My very best friend at the time ended up kissing me at a party. All of the sudden everything changed and we were trying to create a relationship that just wasn't going to work. She ended up breaking my heart, but after alot of name calling and me beating up my friend that she dumped me for. We all worked it out, and she is still my closest friend. It is not impossible to get back what you had, it just takes some patience. Good luck, and feel free to e-mail me if you want someone to talk to. jason |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
thanks for the replies....and thanks jason.. i truly hope we get our friendship back thanks for reading, love.... buttercup |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
I really like this poem a lot. I once ended up with my close friend too but I turned him away when he told me how he felt I wish I didn't now because he's out of reach now!! I hope you patch things up with your friend. It's a pity how love can be such a great thing but wreck the best relationships too. I hope things work out 4 U soon. (please read my poem "Regret") |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a very nice poem. You expressed yourself very well in it. Sorry to hear abou what happened...hope one day your friendship with this person will be heeled. Keep up to good writing. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Good poem, it was something I could really relate to. Trying to change the type of relationship with a best friend could ruin what you had to begin with. I hope you can become friends again. Keep up the good work. Steph |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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