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Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

0 posted 2000-07-08 07:50 PM

There's a kitten in the park,
crying for her mom,
I can do nothing for her pain
but hold her in my arms
and prove that there is love
even when it hurts too much
to ask God just why
we always lose that someone
who made life too simple to cry.
Because this little kitten
shares a broken heart like mine,
I know she knows that there is something, somewhere
that will stop the hands of time
and bring love back to me
in some kind of fashion
that is too complex to see.
But in this little park,
I sit as it begins to rain,
and cover the little jewel I found today
to bring love my way again
even after I lost my true best friend.

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

1 posted 2000-07-09 01:18 AM

This poem is very good. I like how you identify with the kitten. I enjoyed the emotion of this poem also

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-07-09 07:11 AM

Hey there, I loved the way you worded and put this poem together. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-09 12:07 PM

This is so sweet, tender and so emotional Kitten ... tugged at my heart strings you did. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

4 posted 2000-07-09 02:28 PM

I hope you took the kitty home, cause he would allways show you love. Very nice, and good show of emotion. Keep it up.

jason

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

5 posted 2000-07-09 04:41 PM

This poem gave my goosebumps! It is lovely and so sad.

Hope your pain will soon be taken away.

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-01 10:48 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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