A song for jen (my best friend pat wrote this for me )respond PLEASE :)

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A song for jen (my best friend pat wrote this for me )respond PLEASE :)

Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2000-07-07 04:06 PM

this isnt a poem its a song that my muscialy talented awsome bestest best friend the best guy in the world (next to my boyfreind i guess) wrote for me

[verse]

thinkin back on those days i never thought that you wanted me

now that i think about it you showed every sign,

how could i been so blind.

even though your heart does not belong to me

its you i only see...

[pre-chorus]

you forced me to choose and i didnt know what id loose!!

and look and me now i cant get over you!

[chorus]

why didnt i didnt i think about it longer

why didnt i didnt i act a little stonger

remember me, i was young and confused

i didnt know what to do

[verse]

so i sat back and watched you take another path

in this life that you lead

those days went by so fast

those days your love for me wouldnt last

you couldnt wait for the day that my heart would fall for you

[pre-chorus]
[chorus]

[This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 07-08-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-07-07 08:18 PM

well jenabou i think that you should tell your friend pat that he did a really good job...i think that he may like you more then a best friend...and maybe one day you will be more then friends...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-08 11:52 AM

A pat on the back for Pat! Well done, I think he's a little smitten with ya Jenabou!

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-08-2000).]

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2000-07-08 02:26 PM

This guy has something for you sweetie, I'm pretty sure you already know that.. correct?
Maybe you want to check your (Iguess) relationship... and see what your bestest guy has to offer.
Jenn

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2000-07-08 03:15 PM

Hey that was good. As I'm sure you've noticed, he might feel something more for you. I know if someone wrote something like that to me I would think things over. Good luck!
Bel

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-01 10:44 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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