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Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2000-07-06 05:28 PM


IN LIFE WE ARE NEVER ALONE
THERE IS ALWAYS SOMEONE WE TRUST
WHEN YOU ARE HURTING INSIDE
THEY CARE FOR YOU
WHEN YOU ARE IN A TIME OF TROUBLE
THEY WILL HELP YOU

YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT U WILL CALL THEM
BUT YOU WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THEM
WHENEVER YOU ARE NOT FEELING GOOD
THEY ALWAYS CHEER YOU UP
THESE FEW ARE NOT JUST PEOPLE THAT CARE,
THEY ARE TRUE FRIENDS


© Copyright 2000 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-06 06:25 PM


this is a BEAUTIFUL poem...but you see not all the people we think are true friends are really that...i had some of my "true" friends stab me in the back...but not all people are like that huh???i guess i need to find some of those people...i think that you should submit this for the book...i would vote for it but i cant...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-07 11:16 AM


This poem was very short, sweet, and had a point.  I enjoyed this poem very much.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 10:38 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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