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Wicced_Witch
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 04:17 PM

Its been quite a long time since I posted anything, this one I wrote about two years ago and just found so I decided it would be good for my comeback.

I hope that what we have will never end
friends like you are hard to find
If you can't tell I care about you, you must be blind
but dont make me torn between friends

We are closer than we have ever been
You have a special place in my heart
What you said can break us apart
It will make me torn between friends

You say that you love me, better than he can
You say you want us to be something more
Now why did you have to go and do that for
You are making me be torn between friends

Do I like you and still love another man
My feelings are leaving me confused
Can I say I love you, and would it be true
Why do I have to be torn between friends

Everything came together for me in the end
I thought about it and now I'll take a stand
Now I know I am in love with no one but the other man
I dont want to be torn between friends

Our frienship is strong an it will mend
I do love you but in a different way
My love for him grows more and more everyday
I will not be torn between friends

This is to the two best friends this girl can have...I love you guys

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-06 04:57 PM

Hey there, since I have never read any of your work, but I really liked this one. I hope to see more from you.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-07-06 05:29 PM

girl you better keep on posting you poems here...cuz i like this one alot...my favorite part is the last line "I WILL NOT BE TORN BETWEEN FRIENDS"...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

BabyGirl1
Member

since 2000-07-02

Posts 91
Morris, IL

3 posted 2000-07-06 10:16 PM

I really like this poem. I know how it is to have to choose between a best friend and another guy. (One of my best friends is a guy) Keep up the great work. I like your writing

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-01 10:36 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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