Teen Poetry #3 |
Not as easy, as easy as it is |
TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
It is so easy to judge a book and to not see the words inside where the stories hide and trash it for it's look. It is not so easy to pick a book that will set you free, to read the words inside, leave yourself behind and be totally hooked. It is not so easy to be a good book, to be the story with the words inside which no one can find, to be trashed for your look. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Excellent writing TearsofPearls! That was a thinker it was .. very thought provoking indeed. I can see you're a lovely book from cover to cover! Wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This was a wonderful poem. So much meaning and truth inside. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Excellent theme...the comparison and analogy you used were very creative. keep it rollin' Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Great analogy! We are so quick to judge, blind to what we could see if only we would open our eyes. Moving piece. Thomas |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I look at it this way, if I were the book, it's his/her loss, specially if I know I have something to offer. One of these days someone would read. It will come. Patience is a virtue |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I loved the poem. I think that if you judge a book by its cover, then you won't get anywhere in life. Well keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
I loved the poem. It has a great moral to it. Maybe someday people will learn not to judge by looks alone. Keep up the good work. Stephanie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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