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Teen Poetry #3

i need a title!

skachik
New Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 5
Houston area, TX, USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 01:56 PM

I need some advice for a title!

I look at you
You walk into the room
But you walk away
Don't even notice me
Yet you claim me as a friend.

I talk to you
You seem distracted
Yet you have that sparkle in your eye
The sparkle that forever will gleam
In my deep and lonely heart.

You smile at me
I made you laugh
But do you only want to get away?
If only that heart-felt laugh
Could be shared with me each day.

I love you
You just don't get it
I guess I must be a fool
But I'd be a fool forever
To spend forever with you.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-06 02:34 PM

How about "This is How I Feel"? I like the poem very much. I hope that things with you and this person get better. I know the feeling.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-01 10:32 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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