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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Entangled up inside of me The thoughts witin my head Why can't you see all of them The emotions never said The twinkle that was in my eye Is no longer there anymore Why can't you open up and try To mend my broken, heavy heart The lines you never seem to read The memories that never fade Make my heart just want to bleed For hte love I'd thought I'd love |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
very nice, you show your pain very well, and in such a nice rythmical package. Keep it up, because you are very talented. jason |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey...You have a certain depth in all of your writing that I always strive to reach...I envy that...keep it flying. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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