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Teen Poetry #3

I don't know

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2000-06-13 05:55 PM

I've loved you for so long
i just expect my feelings to be a certain way
but they aren't....

I know,i dont understand it either.
It seemed so perfect,you and me
But i think the feelings are fading

I know i still love you but its like something is missing, like something has disapeared
or maybe it was never there to begain with

so much pressure from the people around us
its like our ralationship has become theirs and not ours

I think its time for us to let go,move on
Its not right to continue you like this

You ask me what went wrong?
i dont know...

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

1 posted 2000-06-13 06:03 PM

ok -- you need to stop raiding my head!! i swear, i can relate to everything you write about!! it's a good call...stoping things now, if you feel that way, then it will only bring more pain if you hold on till later, and no one says you have to understand or know why things went wrong, people rarely do! but anyway, extremely good poem!

mr

"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.

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