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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-07-05 12:11 PM

Talking To Myself

Words spoken inside my head.
Words spoken out loud.
Words spoken to myself or someone.
Is anyone around?

Messages relayed full of heart.
Messages not recieved.
Messages not seen upon my lips.
Were they ill percieved?

Asking questions one at a time.
Asking myself first.
Asking others after that.
Can you try to quench this thirst?

Talking futily to these people.
Talking for my health.
Talking, I wish, to someone else.
Talking to myself.

Jeremy D. Halstead 12-17-99

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-05 06:17 AM

Loved your thoughts in this Jeremy! (it's when I start answering myself out loud that I worry) (LOL)

Great writing!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-07-05 02:14 PM

I loved the idea of this poem. I hope to read more. Keep it up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-05 03:27 PM

what can i say jeremy??? besides the fact that your crazy...hahaha...just playing...nah but i tallk to myself sometimes...you may just get a better answer asking yourself then someone else...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-07-05 04:24 PM

i to find myself well talking to myself. i enjoyed this very much as i do all your work and i do hope you keep them coming and i hope you like what i added to our 200th

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

5 posted 2000-07-05 10:48 PM

According to Froid, we talk to ourselves more that we do to anyone else. Although its sad when we are the only one there to listen to ourselves. Then its time to go out and start yelling and screaming obsenities in total strangers faces. Later man.

jason

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

6 posted 2000-07-05 11:57 PM

I raelly liked this one! It flowed so nicely and the rhythym was good. Liked the way you put your thoughts into words. I'm gonna go looks up some more of your stuff now, since I've been away from passions for a while. loved it!
April

Candy
Junior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 17

7 posted 2000-07-06 01:37 AM

i love your poem i really understand what you are talking about. I also liked how you put it.

candy

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-12-01 10:26 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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