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>>>>Fate of Humanity<<<<
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>>>>Fate of Humanity<<<< |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Fate of Humanity Existing somewhere, 'twixt sleep and reality, Standing, and seen through half-opened eyes; Poised in the door, amid lintel and floor, Showing no remorse nor surprise. Swiftly moving, sliding or hovering, Without feet at all to touch bottom; Traveling aloft, with garments so soft, Yet hopeless to humanly touch him. Closer and closer, coming en route, His plans laid clearly before him; Plans to be, or plans for me? Plans which, at this moment, begin. Eyes now closed, he cannot be sensed, How ironic, now all can I see! A touch of his palm, problems are gone... As my soul departs from its body. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was a nice description of what was going on with this one guy. I liked it.......geesh, this was nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great job.. very descriptive and yeah well what else can I say... Good Work!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is written very well! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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