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Life (The Saga Continues)
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Life (The Saga Continues) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Life (The Saga Continues): This life, This monotone sense of reality. We've all been lost in the maze At least once or twice in our time. Sooner or later we're just going to Knock our noses on the corner wall And turn around, look for direction, And inevitably knock it again. This life, This cliché masquerade of being unconsciously conscience. Being a part of the non-existant present. To put it simply, we're blown out Never-gonna-be's of future ions to come. Corner walls worn down with bumps. Bleeding noses with misguided eyes. Such is life, and the saga continues.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Awesome!Man I totally like this one. Excellent job! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You admirably capture the meaning of life. No bull either, you don't pretty it up at all, you just lay it all down. A daring poem, and for this reason, very good. Great as always, DD. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very deep... not sure what the meaning is.. but im sick so i have an excuse i guess ill wait for allan to give it a try! great poem my friend...loved the title too ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
this poem was good i like it a lot, you really are a first class poet hector. but what a dismal view of the world |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was amzing, as always Dopey. Its always nice to read your stuff. REgina |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Powerful imagery Javier ... great expression in this piece. You really relayed a vivid picture with these words, and transferred the mood to the reader well ... nice work!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Dopey: As usual, a great piece of writing. Nice way of conveying your emotions. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Probably one of my favorites from you Javi. Thanx for blessing us with your talent. Much love. ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one made so much sense to me, and I totally agree with Kit. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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