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Shouldn't Care (song)
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Shouldn't Care (song) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Shouldn't Care: I shouldn't care x2 But why do I care? Your tempting ways want me, But oh I want them too. Care care I shouldn't care. Eyeing your every move. I seem to start a drool. It's all such a hell. Oh well, but I shouldn't care ....I do. You're just so perfect In the madness of my mind. It's all mine, you're mine. Not mine..... I shouldn't care x2 But why do I care? I love you, only you. I do I do..... But why do I care? I'm trapped in despair. Oh hell, I shouldn't care. ....I do.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
BOO-TI-FUL lol great work as usual  ~*Justine*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Woah, yeah, I really like this one, it's so great man. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I always worry about writing songs, they never turn out quite right. This was a good one, though. I could learn a thing or two. Might be better if you were to put some music to it, though. Still, a nice read. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
awesome.. i know what you mean about loving someone and you dont want to care.. beatiful song! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I realize that my songs don't rate too well here haha. My last two songs that I posted only got 1 reply each. Then they went into the dust pile. Next time I write a song I'm not going to put SONG next to it. I'll psyche you all out and make you come in...suckerzzzzz For those who read: Thanks, your compliments were well taken. Makes me want to post more songs. hehe I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey sorry I'm late... It's only been a day though, don't sell me out so quickly. hehe I enjoy your songs... keep writting them and playing your guitar. Maybe we'll hear ya on the radio some day. Nice one here Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
This is soo great, I am sorry I missed your other songs... I think, I don't remember reading them... All your work is great Dopey, so keep posting it ALL!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, this is great, I love it... Bel |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
this is great Dopey! can't wait to read more! Love ya~ Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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