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The Lonely Road
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The Lonely Road |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
When he left me it felt so empth The sight of him holding her when I knew it should be me As the tears trickle down my face my sadness grew I wanted so much to be with him But no one heard my cries of pain No one looked past his happiness to see my sadness The cold winds blew in my face as I walked down the narrow road alone The sadness fell like sheets of rain from my eyes If I could have just one more chance One more ray of sunlight As I look ahead of me on the narrow road, I see a face The face looks familiar, as though it were my sisters. She turns to me and says in her little soft voice "I love you sis" She reaches up to give me a long warm hug. The rain lwts up and the sun shines I am no longer alone in this world Although I know I may never get a second chance with him I know someone still cares. He will stay with her, holding her But never again will I walk the narrow road alone. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
As alwayz beautifully inspiring verse. Can't believe I've known you this long and you've kept this hidden from me. Love it. Astound me with some more. TAP2 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is one of the best poems that i have read by you...it is really beautiful...its good that you and your sister have such a good relationship...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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AndrewDL Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 24California |
Beautiful poem, kind of a reminder that there will always be someone that will be there to love you and help you through the toughest of times. very well done, keep writing. -Andrew Trust too much, and you may be deceived, but trust too little and you will live in torment forever. |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
It goes to show that you'll always have your family and friends long after the boyfriends have wandered off into the sunset.With them you'll never be lonely. Great poem. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey kid... I'm impressed...not only with the way you've penned what's inside, but the maturity and optimistic growth you've achieved. It's wierd, I know you're a friend of mine and obviously one that I know far less about than I'd ever imagined. Maybe someday we can regail upon our art and the emotions that have driven it through us. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely and positive poem BabyGirl ... amidst the sadness, to find that you are truly not alone is a happiness so great ... wonderfully expressed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i had to vote for a wonderful poem like this and i hope that you do keep it up and have enjoyed it here as much as i have. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Thank you all for your inspiring words. I am glad that you can enjoy my writing as much as I enjoy writing it! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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