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Bottled Rage |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
Dig into my soul, Forces of evil make me whole. Everyday I awaken to a new nightmare, Where people have the guts to stop and stare. Walk thru the streets of time, Destined to a life of violence and crime. When you see lightning strike, Prepare for your long and treaturous hike. Standing at Hell's gates, Looking back at everyones fates. I see your fate and begin to cry, For I know still why you had to die. It's because of who I am, Well plotted scam. Didn't see it coming at all, Down and down you fall. Look into your beautiful eyes, Glaring in his thinking everyone dies. Stay by your side cleaning you from blood, Tears cause a massive flood. Weeks go by then a sign, On his carcass wild animals will dine. Beaten so bad he lies in bed, Nothing more to really be said. 15 years later scheduled to die, Not for him but for you I cry. Look up to see your face, Wondering if someday we'll be in the same place. I know I'm going to Hell, Heaven is what I want if not oh well. I write you letters put them on your grave, Apologizing for you I did not save. Your beautiful face divided in two, How can anyone do this to you? When you see the lightning down, You better stay awake because that means I'm in your town... *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001 |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Unknown~ this poem made me sad and I must say it frightened me a little bit. You wrote some powerful words here. I hope this is not of personal experience but I fear that prollt it is. I'm sorry for your loss and the guilt that you feel. I hope you find a healthy way to release this 'Rage' Regards, Jason< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
yeah its somthin i went thru, and therapy works wonders on a persons mind man so yes i got a way to resolve it all *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001 |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice job,this type of poem is a little strange for this board, but I enjoyed it. I have seen and written some like it at other boards. Very powerful words. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
its only strange if you misinterprate it man, ive got lots of these on here, everyone seems to understand them and hasnt told me to write some other kind so i keep writtin em, thanks for the comment though *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001 |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so powerful I had to just pause after every line to grasp it. Very nicely composed. Good job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Wow, alot of morbidity on here...anyways great job. "Happiness is nothing without the contrast of sadness" -ME! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another one that is powerfully written, great job. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow... your work is incredible.. this is a great poem.. it gave me chills ~*Pixie*~ |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
I loved this poem. It kind of reminds me of the way I would feel inside before I learned that writing helped me release the emotions I keep locked up. Great job and keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more. Steff |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sorry for your loss! It sounds as though you're really angry with this person. And that's normal! But, God is the avenger of blood. I can rest assure you, that when this person dies, he will answer for what he's done. He must stand before God and the person he murdered. It is up to the 3 of them what will be done. So please, don't do anything rash. Try praying to let some of this anger go. As I shall be praying for you. I know it's not an easy thing to do, when you're in so much pain because someone you care deeply for is taken from you. You do not need to forgive the act, but forgive to help you go on. And rest in the fact that God knows all, and it is not forgotten! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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