Teen Poetry #3 |
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Longing to be found( a special child in need) |
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Miracle Junior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 22 |
A child who knows not right from wrong. Who lives there life like a song. Not knowing the words the pitch if its high. Who lives there life not getting by. A child who lives in a world of their own not knowing what to say. Not knowing what life really means. They live in their own way. A child who can not find the way. There is not light in their day. Thier lost in the ocean drifting away only to be found by the light of the day. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
We are all drifters... we all in one way or another drift betweent things... not knowing where we are going nor where we will end up... at some stage or another we will be rescued and this will be a glorious day... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice poem. I hope to read more from you. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this poem, it has me thinking, good job ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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