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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You and I I see you standing there... You smile straight at me. I know you watch me walk away... You need to understand. I class our friendship true... You have to understand. I need you as a friend now... You really need to accept this. I never want to hurt or lose you... You mean the world to me. I need you as my friend... Do you understand??? Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
You know something? I love this one! u described feelings in a good way. I think I'm gonna send this to someone...may I do so?  ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
be my guest, glad you liked it!!Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice, i hope things work out for you melz.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope your friend stays as a real friend to you. Great job on this poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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