Teen Poetry #3 |
Love's a Bumpy Road |
DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Love's a Bumpy Road Have you ever loved someone so much But you know they do not feel the same And when you look into their eyes You realize there's no one you can blame. You cant force the feelings That just aren't there No matter how hard you try You cant make someone care. I've learned that love's a bumpy road That has many twists and turns But you always get passed the hard spots And this is something your heart learns. You can't go on forever Just sitting all alone You have to move on with your life You can make it on your own. Just have faith in yourself And everything that you do Then soon your troubles with resolve And your dreams will come true. Dont focus on the bad things Just leave your past behind Walk tall with your head up And your future will be kind. You dont need a man That makes you cry more than you smile You need someone to make you laugh And make your life worthwhile. And when you find this special man He'll want to have your heart But remember to be careful Cause pain makes it fall apart. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great poem The search for love is not easy keep posting Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This was so true and so wise... very well done *claps* |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
wow! I love this one. so true feelings, about life and love...how to find someone with true love? I loved the subject. keep writing DreamerGrl27 ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Indeed, very true...a very good poem I must say! "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
As jeremy said... the search for love is hard... but once you find it, it is a grand and happy feeling, though losing it just crushes you again... but that feeling of love is nothing when compared... Melz!! P.S. Great poem... love it!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this poem rocks!!!! wonderful job... u put the truth right out there. i love this... hehehe good job. keep posting lovely ones like this girl. ~*Valerie*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a great poem! I liked it a lot and you are so right on this one. Good job! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Thanks for your replies everyone!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You seem to have written a lot of wise things into this poem, great job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
*gives you a round of applause* this is prefectly stated!!! great flow very good work keep it up!! ~*pixie*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was very inspirational! I love it!! Love definitely is a bumpy road, but all works out well!! Great job, well written!! Keep writing!! Luv Always, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Often the reason that you cry for a man is because of not what he has done, but because of how attached to him you are. He is not making you cry, you are making yourself cry by taking his actions out of proportion. I'm not accusing you of anything, just giving you advice. Try to think about how you would be affected if it was done by anybody else, and see if you are being fair. Good poem. Keep it up. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is so true hun. You definately have words of wisdom in these poems of yours. I liked this one a lot Love is never an easy thing, i think if it was then everyone would take it for granted and never truely realize how lucky you are to posses those types of feelings...excellent poem, keep them comin ok? |
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