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mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

0 posted 2001-01-06 07:06 PM

WHY WON'T YOU LISTEN
whean i talk to you

WHY DON'T YOU HERE ME
when i cry for help

WHY I'M I HERE
when no one else is

I SEEM LIKE A GHOST
when i try to explain

SO I WALK AWAY
there is no hope

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

1 posted 2001-01-06 07:26 PM

You sure did express your feelings in this poem. I've never read somthing like this before. I don't like it when people don't listen to me and it just makes me sad and MAD. Hehe...well I'll listen to you if you want to talk somtime. Just e-mail me!

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-06 09:26 PM

I like the format of this one. Good job! And yes, there is hope.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

3 posted 2001-01-07 12:01 PM

Mikey... don't lose hope... so long as there is love, there is hope... so long as you can see her and think of her, then there is hope... keep a hold of that and don't let go...

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-01-07 12:19 PM

Hmm... this one is a real thinker.
I think that I see what you are expressing-- that you are ignored and left to yourself far too often, correct? That when there is a real problem, nobody listens to you.
I'm all ears. Ever need to talk, you can talk to me, ok?
I think that the same can be said for everyone else here.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-01-07 01:48 PM

I like this format too, and the poem is expressed well. If this is how you're feeling, I hope these feelings do not stay with you, there are people who will listen and care.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-01-08 07:10 PM

short but derict to the point. Don't you hate it when you're like the wind...it's like you just pass by people. Thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

7 posted 2001-01-08 07:30 PM

this is a very expressive poem as usual

great work.. keep your chin up
~*Pixie*~

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