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Stephanya
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0 posted 2001-01-04 08:54 PM



Always together
Always staying strong
We won't part ever
Because you and I belong

When you think you've lost hope
And you've almost given up faith
Keep your head afloat
And don't ever lose your girl's gentle embrace

For you and her both
There lies a future ahead
She sees through each sunflower scope
To feel each tear that you shed

When our actions seem few
And our expressions became a remembered picture
Our silent written wrods keep us stuck like glue
While we look ahead to a better loving future

You and me
We become we
Her and he
We will always be


I Love You More Than Anything, Justin...4 more months left of this heart-aching seperation...See you soon... (**



(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

© Copyright 2001 Stephani B.-01201 - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-01-04 09:20 PM


This was great but an unfortunate seperation seemed to occur from what i read at the bottom. I sure do hope that your relationship lasts long.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

X_me_X
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since 2000-08-18
Posts 37

2 posted 2001-01-04 09:25 PM


aaaww
thats so sweet
i really liked this poem
its like exactly how i feel about my bf


~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~

jeremydraul
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-01-04 09:30 PM


sweet and charming
sorry to hear bout the seperation...
..but the poem was very cute
keep it up
best wishes

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

~sugarpie313~
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4 posted 2001-01-04 09:35 PM


i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem!!!!  it's sooo touching. i am almost with this guy and i am going to have him read this when we get together. i'm hoping it'll be SOON! LOL  
hehehe well you did a GREAT job, i want to see more!!!

*VALERIE*

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

Stephanya
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5 posted 2001-01-04 09:39 PM


Thanks everybody for the quick responses  

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 2001-01-05 12:28 PM


You are making me jealous!  My one and only fault (yes, there is one.  I know, i was shocked, too...) is that I can't, for the life of me, write love poetry!  Why oh why?
GREAT poem!  I was going "aww" so much that my jaw hurts!  Keep up the good work!

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-05-2001).]

Melster
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7 posted 2001-01-05 12:38 PM


Great peice of work...  love is soo powerful...

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Lakewalker
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8 posted 2001-01-05 12:32 PM


Good job on the poem!!  What's keeping you two apart???  

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Stephanya
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9 posted 2001-01-05 11:37 PM


Hate to say it, but an alcohol problem...

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Suga_Baby
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Maine, USA
10 posted 2001-01-06 12:29 PM


This was a great poem, but very sad! 4+ months is a very LONG time!! What's separating you??  
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11 posted 2001-01-07 07:19 PM


hmmmm......seems like everyone is in love with a Justin guy.  This is like the 3rd or 4th Justin amongst the girls in the forum.  Maybe I should change my name to Justin   just kidding  

Beaitifully written poem.  I see that you are definietly under love's spell.  Stay happy and thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Stephanya
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12 posted 2001-01-09 02:00 AM


LOL, who else in here is in Love with a Justin? Thanks again for your responses. I really appreciate them!

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
13 posted 2001-01-09 01:34 PM


I'm sorry to hear this, but as long as you survive the seperation, you'll be together again

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

IsGona
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14 posted 2001-01-09 05:05 PM


I hope the next four months fly by, because I know how you feel.  I too, am in love with a Justin... LOL... just kidding.. I am in love with a Michelle and I miss her alot lately, but we will see each other after this school semester.  SO yeah... I know the feeling.  
Best Wishes,
Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Allan Riverwood
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15 posted 2001-01-09 05:19 PM


man oh man... what of the next justin who stops in our forum?  He shall feel loved, I'll bet?
lol
Great observation, Acire.

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16 posted 2001-01-12 10:09 PM


This is such a sweet poem  
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