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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Always together Always staying strong We won't part ever Because you and I belong When you think you've lost hope And you've almost given up faith Keep your head afloat And don't ever lose your girl's gentle embrace For you and her both There lies a future ahead She sees through each sunflower scope To feel each tear that you shed When our actions seem few And our expressions became a remembered picture Our silent written wrods keep us stuck like glue While we look ahead to a better loving future You and me We become we Her and he We will always be I Love You More Than Anything, Justin...4 more months left of this heart-aching seperation...See you soon...  (**(:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." .. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great but an unfortunate seperation seemed to occur from what i read at the bottom. I sure do hope that your relationship lasts long.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
aaaww thats so sweet i really liked this poem its like exactly how i feel about my bf ~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sweet and charming sorry to hear bout the seperation... ..but the poem was very cute keep it up best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem!!!! it's sooo touching. i am almost with this guy and i am going to have him read this when we get together. i'm hoping it'll be SOON! LOL  hehehe well you did a GREAT job, i want to see more!!! *VALERIE* *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Thanks everybody for the quick responses (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." .. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You are making me jealous! My one and only fault (yes, there is one. I know, i was shocked, too...) is that I can't, for the life of me, write love poetry! Why oh why? GREAT poem! I was going "aww" so much that my jaw hurts! Keep up the good work! [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great peice of work... love is soo powerful... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on the poem!! What's keeping you two apart??? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Hate to say it, but an alcohol problem... (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." .. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This was a great poem, but very sad! 4+ months is a very LONG time!! What's separating you??  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmm......seems like everyone is in love with a Justin guy. This is like the 3rd or 4th Justin amongst the girls in the forum. Maybe I should change my name to Justin  just kidding Beaitifully written poem. I see that you are definietly under love's spell. Stay happy and thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
LOL, who else in here is in Love with a Justin? Thanks again for your responses. I really appreciate them! (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." .. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm sorry to hear this, but as long as you survive the seperation, you'll be together again "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I hope the next four months fly by, because I know how you feel. I too, am in love with a Justin... LOL... just kidding.. I am in love with a Michelle and I miss her alot lately, but we will see each other after this school semester. SO yeah... I know the feeling. Best Wishes, Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
man oh man... what of the next justin who stops in our forum? He shall feel loved, I'll bet? lol Great observation, Acire. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is such a sweet poem |
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