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Dear You.... (dedicated to you!!) |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Dear You... I sit here watching my boy... Our boy... He has had a big day my boy, Now my boy is fast asleep, My boy, just here on my lap, He's a beautiful site for me to see, He screamed for hours on end, I didn't know what to do... I am still learning, We - him and I are still learning Learning about each other... But now all is fine once again. I know that he is the most important Thing in my life now and forever. These moments I will never forget, Just sitting here looking at him, Watching him sleep soo peacefully Knowing that he will wake in the morning And smile, laugh, cry and build me memories That I will hold a cherish forever Like the day he came into my life! My only regret is that his you aren't here To share with me these memories, To share with me his beauty, To know that this life is here And we created this here with love. Maybe it isn't love now, But once long ago it was, There may be hurtful words And long ago good-byes That I would never wish to change, But still I wish you were here, This is part of you too Although you may not admit it This life here in my arms... Is me and he is also you And no matter how much I despise you I wish you could accept this child Into your life and not just ignore The mistakes we both made. We have to accept our mistakes now, We can't take them back, We now have to look after them And love them like We once loved each other... Guys I am not sure what is going on in my head at the moment... everything is changing and nothing seems right anymore and none of my friends seem to understand completely what is going on, but I guess that's cause I don't either... Michael came and saw me the other day and I just don't know... I don't know what to do... Melz!!< !signature--> Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly [This message has been edited by Melster (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really tough situation, but no matter what happens with the father, you should take pride that you are a good mother. I hope everything works out for you! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i agree with lovebug. be proud your a good mother. Regina |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You're doing an awesome job... I can tell how much you love your son... Don't quit doing whatever you're doing, cause whatever you're doing, you're doing it right.  ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was a nice read. It's good to know you kept the child and wil provide it with a loving and caring environment. Keep THAT up......it's best for everybody.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow... you know, I bet motherhood is tough. I'm sorry that the boy's father is acting his shoe size... sometimes people just can't come to terms with their responsibilities. I'm sure you're a great mom, good luck with the rest of it! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
well as long as youre taking good care of this child ..thats all that matters great job on your expression ..get better best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Your poem was expressed well, but I don't know what you should do either. Geee, I'm such a great help around here, ha. But like they said, you're doing great as a mother, and defintely keep that up "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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mikeykrazy Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 37U.S.A |
i really like this poem. seems like it was written from the heart thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks everyone for your kind words and replies... it always makes me feel good to know that my efforts that go into reading and replying to as many as I can is worth it!! ~Lovebug~ I try hard to be a good mum... I think I am doing something right cause most of the time we are both happy!! ~Ina~ Thanks also.. as I said... I try hard!! ~Skyfire~ You are right, I love him with all my heart!! ~Dopey~ I was never sure if keeping him was the right thing to do, I still have my doubts, but I know it was!! ~Jenn~ His Dad... Well what more can I say... I have tried to include him in his life, but I can't force him to!! He will regret it one day I reckon!! ~Jeremy~ I try to do my best!! ~Lake~ You always help... you tell us what you think of our poetry knowing we are getting a true response!! ~Mikey~ Thanks... It came from the depths of my heart!! Thanks again everyone... your time means the world to me!! Sorry I am a little behind in posts... I have been out for a few days and working hard... I will catch up soon I promise!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
I can almost feel all you write the expressive description is amazing...I feel the love you have Great Job |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks Trueluv!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I hope everything gets figured out for you. It can be hard when your mind is so confusing and it feels like no one, not even your friends understand. I hope that you start feeling better soon. Good poem |
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