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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Attention captured by a demon And fed to the abyss. Unicorn feeds on silence; Knowledge must be bliss. Alas! The wretched monster Pushes spectacles past her nose. Welcome back to reality; Life of parabolae and rows. inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This is so creative! I really liked it...very unique. I loved the ending: Welcome back to reality; Life of parabolae and rows Great job!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
awesome child! this was very well written a nice short descriptive poem i enjoyed reading another inspirational poem! best wishes ~JDR< !signature--> "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow.. kinda reminds me of my advanced algebra clas!! LOL! very nice  ~*Justine*~ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Pen + Paper + You = Great poems This was good. You describe Ms. Hedge, my high school calc teacher, perfectly. Thanks for the read, JAson "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here carly......I hate math class and write poems about it. None of which I could post up here.....graphic language hehe.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Love it! Math is evil... doing math homework, I assume? I was, and it was awful!  That was great!~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
this made me laugh!! Great work!! Melz!! P.S. sorry if it wasn't supposed to be funny!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey everyone, and many thanks to you all!! And whatever comes to your mind when you read is fine with me, most of my stuff means something to me but may mean a completely different thing to somebody else. OK don't ask where that came from...Anyways, thanks again for your kind words!! ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I don't like math but I do like your poem, nice work! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
AHHH! MATH CLASS!!!!!! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I hate math! I used to e good at it.... then came freshman Algebra.....uck. I finally got a break only to be forced to take it again next year, Oh how it will suck! Loved the poem! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Well written. Sorry it took me so long to respond... for some reason I missed this one. I am lucky to have found it. ^_^ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Carly Carly Carly you never seize to amaze me you are way to advance in writing specially for your age simply beautiful  thanks for the wonderful read keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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