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What Happened Last Night? (part 2)
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What Happened Last Night? (part 2) |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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What happened last night? Did you have a good time? Thank you for telling me the truth. I'm glad that the only girls there are your cousins. And I'm glad you didn't get drunk. Cause we both know what you're like. I still don't know how I'd have reacted if I'd found Out you cheated. You say you love me, and I'm glad that your Love will keep you from another girl. I trust you, but I was so worried. But you're aware of what you do even when you're drunk. Thank you for not lying to me, I would've found out. Your brother would've told me right away. He's a nerd, but he doesn't like it when I'm hurt. I'm glad you told me though. You probably think I'm a worrying Dork who doesn't trust you ever since I asked. I do trust you, and I WAS worried. What else can I say? I'm scared, confused, missing you, and I love you. I'm less insecure than I was. But I still am a little. I just needed to know. **I wrote the first one when I found out that Rob was going to a New Year's party. His father left out a few important details (like the fact that it was at his aunt's place), so I was worried that something might happen with another girl if he drank(let's just say he gets slightly randy when he drinks). I wrote the second one three hours after the first one when I found out the details his father forgot to tell me. I talked to him about it, and everything's good now. I know I can trust him no matter what.  [This message has been edited by Skyfire (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
great conclusion!!! i am glad everything was okay  ~*Justine*~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thanks for the comments. I was kinda nervous when I talked to Rob about it, but I knew that it had to be done. I didn't come out and say "were you drinking,and did you cheat on me?", I kinda did it in a roundabout way ("I was thinking the other day about something..." etc), but I think he knew what I was refferring to. Sadly, guys aren't as stupid as we'd sometimes like to think, right? LOL  ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
we do make guys out to be pretty dumb don't we? *L* but it is hard sometimes cause we don't know exactly what they are thinking sadly!! ~*Justine*~ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm so glad that everything worked out for you two. It just shows how communication can change how things go in a relationship. I enjoyed both pieces! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Nice work. I am really glad you can trust your guy, I hope you always can. Honesty and trust are key. Good luck in the future. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
beautiful closure! it was very sweet and lovely im glad he loves you great poem best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
yay!!!!that is great! great way to close this poem! Regina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well it's good to knwo he didn't cheat. Phew!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
How can so many people reply to part two when part one doesn't have as many replies? Anyway, I'm glad to hear things worked out "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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