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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I noticed him almost immediatly. Something about him semi-sweet. I thought that perhaps behind those eyes behind the insecure "new kid" there would lie a heart of gold. I was wrong I realized too late after he made me... made me cry and feel like I had to crawl. Run away I cried yet my lead feet never heard. All one big dellusion made my life a dizzy spell. Finally after the big spill I awakened. < !signature--> "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is sad. You gave someone the benifet of the doubt and he hurt you. It's good to believe in ppl, but it's hard to after being hurt like this. I hope that you are able to walk away from this with out very many scars. Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Somethings I just can't forget. "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
So sad......i hope all is well. I liked the poem tho!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I too have been in the same boat, but i did not get hurt as bad. I can't believe some people are like that, as soon as ppl start feeling bad for them they take advantage of it.  it's pathetic. i hope your okay and soon u can get over everything and forget it  *do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
That is so sad. Just remember that although someone hurt you, don't turn your back on more 'new kids'. Eventually you'll find someone who loves you. What a way to get it out in writing though. Keep it up! ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem... Isgona said all that I would have said... so yeah... keep up the great work and believe that one day someone will treat you right!!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I tdoes hurt when the person you thought to be, wasn't at all. Sorry to hear that you have to go thru such an unfairness in life. thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
girl, you need to cheer up too many bad things happening to you i hope you truly get better great poem best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think everyone else had said great things, so if I had the energy to go back and cut and paste it all I would I like the way that you wrote this poem!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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