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Only your Imagination |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
If i depart In an oncoming day Just leave the memories And walk away I'm bitter sweet Dont want to be toyed Tired of falling For these heart breaking boys Want to move on And leave this world Want to find a happiness Inside this lost lil gurl Cant move on Without letting go of the past Life moves too slow Im dying too fast You all think im better Well i guess its a game Medicine tried to fix me But not a damn thing did it change I'm not really better Its funny that you thought i am Life already sux and then you die now its time for the 2nd part to have began. Im not shur what i want All i know is i want out Of this stupid life of mine And what living is all about Its too painful Why do u think im this way? Just leave me be And let me go astray No more helping hands Or tiny little pills No more doctors Asking you how you feel So i guess what im saying Is i tricked u all im not ok So now that you know Forever locked in me will i stay |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this had a smooth flow and great rhythm... it was very easy to read and it portayed a great poem! "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is so sad, beautfully written, very emotional |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
aaaaaah hey that's a sad one! but a good one too...I hope you can fix whatever's going on so that we can hear more from you!! "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This is so beautiful. I hope it isn't about you.  but this is a great poem... nice job.*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
aaaaaah hey that's a sad one! but a good one too...I hope you can fix whatever's going on so that we can hear more from you!! "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
MICHELLE! We NEED to talk, ure scarin the krap outa me! ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was scary......shugar......hope all is well...c'mon girl...nothing stupid now.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
ok i see everyone is gettin shooken up by this...no worries i just had a bad night and i needed to write this. Kiley---dont worry hun im ok and we'll talk soon Dopey--Things will get better soon Thanx you all for your replies!! |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
The was an excelent poem. Very emotional. Thank you for sharing. I have enjoyed reading your work. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You okay? I think I'm reading too much between the lines (of a lot of poems) tonight, but if you want to talk, I'm only an email away!  ~*Skyfire "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is very expressive Shugar, and so very sorrowful. I'm glad to read in your response that you seem to be doing OK, and know that writing your thoughts can be a wonderful release as you've done here. I do it myself. Please keep those lines of communication open with your family ... let them know how you are truly feeling, sometimes there is a minor adjustment in pills that will help level things out, and they can't help unless you do tell them. Please remember that we are all here, we care about you, and wish you all the best. Keep talking and sharing your feelings with your family, keep writing, and e-mail me directly if you need someone to talk to Shugar ... I'm here to listen if you need me. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I took your poem very seriously too, I guess it just had that power in it! It is written very well and I hope you're feeling beter "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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