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Tears of Glass
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0 posted 2001-01-01 02:31 AM


Sorry I've posted so much at one time, but I'm leaving for a little bit, so I wanted to get these posted before I leave.  Take care everyone!


This year I will hate myself,
But maybe not as much.
This year I will hurt myself,
But might not be so rough.

This year I'll still play the game,
I never seem to win.
But this year I will change the rules,
And give up this life of sin.

This year I will feel the ache,
Of my heart that's turned to stone.
But this year I will share my pain,
And I won't suffer alone.

This year I will mourn my past,
And atleast let myself cry.
This year I will find my wings,
And I'll learn how to fly.

*Jennifer

Well, that's it.. Take care, and I should be back soon!  Bye bye.



© Copyright 2001 Jennifer M. - All Rights Reserved
Melster
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Brisbane, Qld, Australia
1 posted 2001-01-01 03:59 AM


Great poem...  you write soo well!!  Look forward to seeing more when you return!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

DancinQueen
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2 posted 2001-01-01 02:08 PM


oh wow! This was great..im with Melz, cant wait to read more when you return!

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

jeremydraul
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-01-01 04:40 PM


i dont know what Ill do without your beautiful poems! another great one!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Virgil
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 43
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2001-01-01 04:51 PM


That's how I feel every New Year...we must have lots in common! Nice work

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"I AM CANADIAN!!"

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 142

5 posted 2001-01-01 05:15 PM


This was really amazing...all the words fit together so perfectly. I loved the meaning of it too...thats a really good new years resolution. Hope everything works out okay.
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6 posted 2001-01-01 11:02 PM


This was a great new years resolution and i hope that this year will be better for you than the last. Great poem and come back soon!
TopGunLauren
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7 posted 2001-01-01 11:42 PM


  That was a great poem and it sounded a lot like my New Years resolution. But anyway come back soon because I enjoy reading your poems.
  Lauren

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8 posted 2001-01-01 11:54 PM


This was amazing. I sooooooo loved this poem. nice one!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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9 posted 2001-01-02 08:04 PM


Now that is really good   I like it a lot.  Just sorry to hear that you're gonna be gone for a while    come back soon

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Lakewalker
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10 posted 2001-01-03 06:10 PM


Good poem, and choice choice to start changing things!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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