Teen Poetry #3 |
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This Year, A New Year's Resolution |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Sorry I've posted so much at one time, but I'm leaving for a little bit, so I wanted to get these posted before I leave. Take care everyone! This year I will hate myself, But maybe not as much. This year I will hurt myself, But might not be so rough. This year I'll still play the game, I never seem to win. But this year I will change the rules, And give up this life of sin. This year I will feel the ache, Of my heart that's turned to stone. But this year I will share my pain, And I won't suffer alone. This year I will mourn my past, And atleast let myself cry. This year I will find my wings, And I'll learn how to fly. *Jennifer Well, that's it.. Take care, and I should be back soon! Bye bye. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem... you write soo well!! Look forward to seeing more when you return!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
oh wow! This was great..im with Melz, cant wait to read more when you return! *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i dont know what Ill do without your beautiful poems! another great one! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
That's how I feel every New Year...we must have lots in common! Nice work "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was really amazing...all the words fit together so perfectly. I loved the meaning of it too...thats a really good new years resolution. Hope everything works out okay. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a great new years resolution and i hope that this year will be better for you than the last. Great poem and come back soon! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That was a great poem and it sounded a lot like my New Years resolution. But anyway come back soon because I enjoy reading your poems. Lauren |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was amazing. I sooooooo loved this poem. nice one! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now that is really good ![]() ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good poem, and choice choice to start changing things! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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