Teen Poetry #3 |
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I Can't Ignore Forever |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I can't ignore forever, This pain inside my heart. It's time to face the feelings, But I don't know where to start. I don't know what tomorrow brings, And I'm terrified of the past. I'm fumbling through today, And at this rate I just won't last. I need an inspiration, a reason to fight. I barely make it through each day, And it gets harder every night. So now the time has come, How do I face the fear? When will I let go? And finally shed a tear... *Jennifer |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That is beautiful... the words touched me soo much!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
geez! no one ever replies to the good ones. well first off Happy New Year. and 2nd off..wow this rocked! ![]() *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
another great one, i cant say too much about your work but right now nothing comes to mind other than awesome! keep it up! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Cool...I know just what you're talking about! Good job! "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Okay...you had me tearing, I have to admit it. This was so amazing. You express yourself so well, and your poems flow so well. I dont know how you do it...you're so talented. I hope everything works out...just keep fighting for yourself and just try to be strong and keep your head up. Everything will get better. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is a beautiful poem, great work ~*Pixie*~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i hope things get better ya know. Nice post......i truly enjoyed this read. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
DON'T GIVE UP!!! That's all I can say. Remember, you can mail me anytime ![]() ~*Skyfire "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job on the poem, I hope you find your inspiration very soon. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oh god do i know exactly how your feeling. This was an amazing poem and you described your feelings and your emotions so beautifully. I really hope that things get better for you soon..if you ever need to talk my sn is Acabalena36...i know exactly what your going through unfortunately..feel better and your poem was wonderful. |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey Jenn, I really thought this poem was good. I hope you get better too. Your best friend, Mr. Wedge, Your #1 fan, Me --Neo |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This was a beautiful and emotional peice... very good job, I loved it! ![]() |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
great post I can relate Best wishes, Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Inspiration is a tough thing to find... but this forum is a gold mine of inspiration. A reason to fight is often lacking... but we look at the rest of our lives without really knowing what will happen. Curiousity is a great reason to fight. Great poem. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Unfortunately, we cannot see into the future. But we do have a better gift, and that's "the will to try" Never give up thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I know exactly how you feel. This was really good. Can't wait for more! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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