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Tears of Glass
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Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2001-01-01 02:15 AM


I can't ignore forever,
This pain inside my heart.
It's time to face the feelings,
But I don't know where to start.

I don't know what tomorrow brings,
And I'm terrified of the past.
I'm fumbling through today,
And at this rate I just won't last.

I need an inspiration,
a reason to fight.
I barely make it through each day,
And it gets harder every night.

So now the time has come,
How do I face the fear?
When will I let go?
And finally shed a tear...

*Jennifer

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer M. - All Rights Reserved
Melster
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1 posted 2001-01-01 03:55 AM


That is beautiful...  the words touched me soo much!!  

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

DancinQueen
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2 posted 2001-01-01 02:03 PM


geez! no one ever replies to the good ones. well first off Happy New Year. and 2nd off..wow this rocked!   Felt like a page right out of my life. I love your work, keep it up

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

jeremydraul
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-01-01 04:42 PM


another great one, i cant say too much about your work but right now nothing comes to mind other than awesome! keep it up!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Virgil
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4 posted 2001-01-01 04:45 PM


Cool...I know just what you're talking about! Good job!

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"I AM CANADIAN!!"

DreamerGrl27
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5 posted 2001-01-01 05:27 PM


Okay...you had me tearing, I have to admit it. This was so amazing. You express yourself so well, and your poems flow so well. I dont know how you do it...you're so talented. I hope everything works out...just keep fighting for yourself and just try to be strong and keep your head up. Everything will get better.
Pixie-Babe03
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6 posted 2001-01-01 05:34 PM


this is a beautiful poem, great work
~*Pixie*~

Dopey Dope
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7 posted 2001-01-01 11:37 PM


Well i hope things get better ya know.
Nice post......i truly enjoyed this read.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Skyfire
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8 posted 2001-01-02 12:52 PM


DON'T GIVE UP!!! That's all I can say. Remember, you can mail me anytime   Great poem!

~*Skyfire

"I am Canadian" - Joe
If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

Lakewalker
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9 posted 2001-01-03 12:51 PM


Nice job on the poem, I hope you find your inspiration very soon.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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10 posted 2001-01-04 08:59 PM


Oh god do i know exactly how your feeling. This was an amazing poem and you described your feelings and your emotions so beautifully. I really hope that things get better for you soon..if you ever need to talk my sn is Acabalena36...i know exactly what your going through unfortunately..feel better and your poem was wonderful.

Neokrew
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11 posted 2001-01-06 11:50 AM


Hey Jenn,

I really thought this poem was good. I hope you get better too.

Your best friend, Mr. Wedge, Your #1 fan, Me

--Neo

Suga_Baby
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12 posted 2001-01-06 11:55 AM


This was a beautiful and emotional peice... very good job, I loved it!  
IsGona
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13 posted 2001-01-06 04:23 PM


great post
I can relate
Best wishes,
Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Allan Riverwood
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14 posted 2001-01-06 06:29 PM


Inspiration is a tough thing to find... but this forum is a gold mine of inspiration.  
A reason to fight is often lacking... but we look at the rest of our lives without really knowing what will happen.  Curiousity is a great reason to fight.
Great poem.

Acies
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15 posted 2001-01-07 07:42 PM


Unfortunately, we cannot see into the future.  But we do have a better gift, and that's "the will to try"  Never give up

thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Jenn Cirrincione
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16 posted 2001-01-07 07:49 PM


I know exactly how you feel. This was really good. Can't wait for more!
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


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