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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-12-31 02:21 AM

Light Switch Mannerisms:

On and off! On and off!
I'm trapped in a light switch horror
Engulfed within a loss of heart.

Off and on! Off and on!
Contemplating over what to do
With the everything of nothing.

On and off! On and off!
I keep treading these cold tiles
While eyeing concret errosion and iron rust.

Off and on! Off and on!
These are the things people do
Just because they have to.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2000-12-31 02:32 AM

i have a feeling this has to do with your relationship? Well, i liked the relation between the two, great post as usual!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Virgil
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 43
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-12-31 02:47 AM

Hey, I really like this one! It's like 2:46 am and i'm responding to it...haha! I like the way it starts with a lightbulb type idea, and then escalates towards a much more meaningful idea; like the Mannerisms of people!

(Great title by the way!)

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"Ending a sentence with a preposition is somethi

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2000-12-31 01:30 PM

i agree with everyone else. the light bulb idea seemed to have much more meaning than just a light bulb...ummm...yeah. i liked the title. good one.
Regina

those who love us,will always love us.those who hate us,may g-d turn their hearts,if he cant may he turn their ankles so we can see them by their limp

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-02 12:25 PM

Thanks guys......i appreciate what you think about this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-01-02 12:40 PM

DD~
I enjoyed this.
My favorite lines were -
'Contemplating over what to do
With the everything of nothing.'

And haven't we all been there ?
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people