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An Abused Heart
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An Abused Heart |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
What started out as friendship has left me with a broken heart being hurt by you, was what scared me from the start. I cherished our friendship I was unsure of how I feel, but after that night we spent together, my heart you seemed to steal. So I decided to give in to my heart. And I traded in a friend, traded him in for a love, A love I ended up losing in the end. I thought you really loved me But now I feel so used My heart was crushed. And my trust was abused You say you didn't mean for it to happen, Our love you just didn't see. It was all just a mistake, You didn't mean to hurt me. I get myself in trouble when Im with you, So now I think it's time to depart, forget all my true feelings, and deny my heart. So I guess I have to say goodbye, But I'll always be your friend, Come to me when you need to talk. I'll be here for you tell the end. ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
very well written. liked it much and enjoyed deeply. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That was great! And I think a lot of people can relate. You expressed your feelings so well, keep up the good writing Bel |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's very hard when a friend betrays your trust, you desctibe it well... I'm also glad you're still willing to make it right: "So I guess I have to say goodbye, But I'll always be your friend, Come to me when you need to talk. I'll be here for you tell the end." "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I think we all can relate to some sort of "friendship turned relationship turned bad." I promise your heart will heal with time. Having your trust betrayed is something that truly is unfortunate and makes you never wanna trust again, just be careful and keep your head up my friend! By the way, I love the way your poem was worded and how it flowed so nicely! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~< !signature--> ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flowed so beautifully Misty! You've expressed yourself well in this poem ... it's so difficult when someone we love and trust crushes our hearts, but your positive outlook on the closing, makes me think you'll do just fine! Truly a wonderful poem, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i love this poem for it hits me straight at heart. This is exactly what i went thru too. too bad someone has to hurt. looking forward to reading your other poems. |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thank you all who replied, and those who voted! Thank you so much, you give me some hope! ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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Candy Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17 |
Oh i love this poem so much. Its writen so well and had alot of feeling. i hope to see more from you. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
yeh, I've drown in that lake before...I've got hundreds of lives though. It's very noble of you to still offer your friendship. It's nice to see that other people can do that...sometimes I feel I'm the only one. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks once again for replying. Is was written from a sad expericene with my best friend i had, me taught me so much, and we cared for each other so much, so we decided to go and find out if there was more, and there was I loved him so much, but we had a bad experience and I had to break up with him and I found out our friendship meant more to me then anything in the world. And we have remaind good friends. ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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