I Just Wanted to Say Goodbye (for my Grandmother)

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-12-30 08:46 AM

I cried last night
   I knew it was coming
But I didn’t expect it
   To come so soon
And now I’m left
   A broken hearted
Teenager
   Justin, now is when
I need you the most
   I need to cry on you
I need to talk to you
   I so wanted you two
To meet
   I love her so much,
But now she’s gone,
   And I didn’t get to
Tell her I love her.
   She just died yesterday
It didn’t come as a
   Surprise, but it still
Tore my heart in two.
   Grandma, I know that
You can hear every word
    That I say…
And I only have one thing left,
    I love you and I’ll miss you!!!

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[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 12-30-2000).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-12-30 11:50 AM

I'm so sorry for your loss Tamma. This is a lovely tribute expressing your love for your grandmother ... you and your family are in my thoughts and prayers ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dopey Dope

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-12-30 12:14 PM

Sorry for the loss.....hope all works out ok.

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sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

3 posted 2000-12-30 01:42 PM

I'm sorry for what was happened to you, losing someone you care about is always hard. But your peom was excellent, keep writing!!

Much Luv,
Priscilla

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DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

4 posted 2000-12-30 03:12 PM

I'm very sorry about your Grandmother, and I think this is a nice tribute to her. And I'm sure she can hear you and she knows that you love her.

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

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State of Despair

5 posted 2000-12-30 03:14 PM

im faced with the similiar situation, my g-grandma is very old and might die soon, I hope you can pull through okay! Nice poem too!

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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6 posted 2000-12-30 05:46 PM

Your poem is good and I hope you're dealing with your loss well.

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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7 posted 2000-12-30 07:38 PM

Tamma, every loss hurts, and it seems like you're handling this as well as can be expected. Don't forget your family. They're sharing this pain, and they're there for you to lean on if you need to. Don't give up!

~*Skyfire

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Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

8 posted 2000-12-30 09:14 PM

im sorry about your Grandmother. i hope all is well.
Regina

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branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

9 posted 2000-12-30 09:57 PM

Tears are wonderful except when there coming from you eyes because of a lost and well tears are coming to mine im so sorry you lost her but she'll always be in your heart and dont forget that ever. good poem

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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10 posted 2000-12-31 12:33 PM

This was a very nice tribute to your grandmother..i am extremely sorry to hear about your loss though. It just shows how precious every second you spend with someone is because you never know if that is the last time you'll see them so never take n e 1 for granted..once again i am very sorry.

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

11 posted 2000-12-31 02:28 PM

Thanks for the support, ya'll!!! it means alot to me...I might not be here much in the upcoming days...so thanks again

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~

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Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

12 posted 2001-01-01 02:33 AM

Grandma's aren't they great... I too dread the day that i lose my gran, she is soo mucha part of my life that I will be lost without her... When she dies, I know that a part of me is going to die along with her, and I know that it is going to be hard...
THis is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful person... Keep her memories close to your heart and she will live on in you!!

Melz!!

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Maine, USA

13 posted 2001-01-01 07:23 PM

Your poem was very good. I too am in the same boat, my aunt recently died from cancer. i never got to tell her that i loved her. If u ever need to talk, or anyone else for that matter, i will listen

~*valerie*~

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